My poem

My Surrender

In the silence of the night

quiet and peace that my might

twinkle star adorn the sky

the moon smile so sweetly

I lay my weary

I surrender my jittery

closed my eyes and remember

only You, I surrender

my lips clam up remain speechless

but my heart still address

I surrender my soul

to come back to You

now, I am believe

only You, I am belief

all and everything

it is Your guiding

Narrative

The girl tells to her friends that their life must surrender to Allah. Allah gives all to their life and They must remember that their life reined the power of cosmic by Allah. Then, when they get the problem they should give it to Allah and Allah will help their problems. The girl says that in the night is good time to they tell their problem to Allah, because in the night, the ambience are quiet and comfortable. The girl says that they should be surrender to Allah in everything condition. It can make their self feel calm to do everything in their life.

The rhyme:

®   “night”,”might”;”sky”,”sweetly”,”weary”,”jittery”;“remember”,“surrender”; “speechless”, “address”;”believe”, “belief”;and ”everything”, “guiding” are rhyming groups.

®   “night”, “might” is consonantal off-rhyme: consonant group.

®   ”weary”, “jittery”;”believe”, “belief” are assonantal off-rhyme: vowel groups.

®   ”believe”, ”belief”;“night”, ”might” is also identical.

Figurative language:

®   “the moon smile so sweetly” is personification because who can smile is only human, here moon’s smile is like human’s smile.

Contradiction:

“Twinkle star adorn the sky” in real, stars are big. They not twinkle but space from here to stars is far, so the star looks little. It is contradiction.

Short line of the story:

My Surrender:

Every night, I always get up to feel silence, quiet and peace. See twinkle star and moon in the sky. When I see them, I feel happy and I remember to the creator. The creator is Allah. if remember Allah, I want throw away my problem. I always close my eyes and remember to You (Allah).My heart always dhikr to Allah. I am belief if all and everything, it is guiding from Allah. So, here I not perfect human always surrender to Allah.

This poem I written to my family and friends, because I want to invite them to remember, dhikr,and surrender to Allah in every time.