My poem

My Surrender

In the silence of the night

quiet and peace that my might

twinkle star adorn the sky

the moon smile so sweetly

I lay my weary

I surrender my jittery

closed my eyes and remember

only You, I surrender

my lips clam up remain speechless

but my heart still address

I surrender my soul

to come back to You

now, I am believe

only You, I am belief

all and everything

it is Your guiding

Narrative

The girl tells to her friends that their life must surrender to Allah. Allah gives all to their life and They must remember that their life reined the power of cosmic by Allah. Then, when they get the problem they should give it to Allah and Allah will help their problems. The girl says that in the night is good time to they tell their problem to Allah, because in the night, the ambience are quiet and comfortable. The girl says that they should be surrender to Allah in everything condition. It can make their self feel calm to do everything in their life.

The rhyme:

®   “night”,”might”;”sky”,”sweetly”,”weary”,”jittery”;“remember”,“surrender”; “speechless”, “address”;”believe”, “belief”;and ”everything”, “guiding” are rhyming groups.

®   “night”, “might” is consonantal off-rhyme: consonant group.

®   ”weary”, “jittery”;”believe”, “belief” are assonantal off-rhyme: vowel groups.

®   ”believe”, ”belief”;“night”, ”might” is also identical.

Figurative language:

®   “the moon smile so sweetly” is personification because who can smile is only human, here moon’s smile is like human’s smile.

Contradiction:

“Twinkle star adorn the sky” in real, stars are big. They not twinkle but space from here to stars is far, so the star looks little. It is contradiction.

Short line of the story:

My Surrender:

Every night, I always get up to feel silence, quiet and peace. See twinkle star and moon in the sky. When I see them, I feel happy and I remember to the creator. The creator is Allah. if remember Allah, I want throw away my problem. I always close my eyes and remember to You (Allah).My heart always dhikr to Allah. I am belief if all and everything, it is guiding from Allah. So, here I not perfect human always surrender to Allah.

This poem I written to my family and friends, because I want to invite them to remember, dhikr,and surrender to Allah in every time.

final-DA-test

 (Situation: This conversation between Helen and Jane in the office on Friday morning. Helen annoyed with Jane, because Jane borrows anything which is her need from Helen every time and it make Helen can’t concentration in her work).

1.       Jane       :     Helen ((come to Helen))

2.       Helen    :     Yes

3.       Jane       :     e . . . Could I borrow a pen, please :::

4.       Helen    :     Sure, emmm . . . here you are

5.       Jane       :     Thanks!

6.       Helen    :     Don’t mention it

7.       Jane       :     Ouch Helen

8.       Helen    :     WHy?

9.       Jane       :     e . . . This pen has blue ink (0,1) .

10.                        can I borrow a pen with black ink? ((in a low voice))

11.   Helen    :     of coURSE here is a pen with black ink

12.   Jane       :     Great, THanks

13.   Helen    :     Sure

14.   Jane       :     Ouch Helen.

15.                        I don’t have . . . any stamps . . .

16.                        can I borrow a stamps . . . Helen please :::

17.   Helen    :     Sure, Jane Here you are :::

18.   Jane      :     THank  you so mUCH :::

19.                       well . . . I’m going to go post office.

20.                       See you later :::  ((go out from  the room))

21.   Helen    :     See you :::

22.   Jane       :     Ouch, It’s // raining.((come to Helen))

23.   Helen    :                       // yes, it is.

24.   Jane       :     I don’t have my umbrella ::: emmm-m-m

25.                        can I borrow . . . your umbrella, Helen?

26.   Helen    :     Of course, here you are Jane

27.   Jane       :     Great! Thanks.

28.                        See you later :::

29.   Helen    :     Can I borrow a pen? :::

30.                        Can I borrow a stamps? :::

31.                        Can I borrow your umbrella? :::

32.                         Jane, Can I borrow your ::: potato chips.

33.                        Thank you ::: ((imitate the Jane’s voice))

Analysis:

Jane is a type of unprepared person because when she needs something and urgent, she only borrows her friend (Helen), she not prepares what her need in her work, before she goes to office. On the other hand, Helen is a type of a prepared person and she is helpful. Because she always have anything that her need to work and she also help Jane when Jane need anything.

From the conversation above, Helen feel disturbed with Jane’s action and Jane not feel disturb Helen so she enjoy when borrow anything to Helen. Here Jane’s use lengthening vocal “please ::: (as in 3 &16) that actually Jane wants attempt to Helen so she lend her thing to Jane. Then Helen’s getting annoyed is supported as in her stressing tone “WHy” (as in 8) and of coURSE (as in 11), which implies that Helen dejected with Jane’s action, because she feel that Jane began disturb her with borrow any thing to her. Jane’s proved her stressing tone “, THanks” (as in 12) and “THank  you so mUCH” (as in 18), which implies that Jane feel happy because Helen lend her thing that her need. Here Jane has consideration use pauses (0,1) (as in 9) it is implies she need 1 second to think before giving judgment of her choice to borrow the pen with black ink. Then the overlapping occurs when Jane says “raining” (as in22) at the same time of Helen’s answer “yes it is” (as in 23).It’s implies that Jane’s utterances has form a question, the function is as the information to Helen. While Helen’s replay is Also Form a answering question but it’s functions is as agreement to Jane’s statement. Then Jane also shows her wary to out her voice, and considers producing her voice by implying with short hesitation “. . .” (as in 3,9,15,16,19 and 25).

The adjacency pair of the conversation above are: Jane is request (she always borrow anything from Helen), Helen is helping (she lend anything which is Jane’s need).A sequence of two utterances by different speakers in conversation. The second utterances is a response to the first utterances. Jane’s utterance has the form as call to Helen, then Helen’s reply is also in the form of answer the question but it’s functions is as reply to Jane’s call. “Helen” as calling (as in 1) and  “yes” as reply to Jane’s calling (as in 2).As request to Helen with flattery shown lengthening (as in 3) and Helen’s response with friendly (as in 4). Helen feel disturb with Jane’s action shown with imitate Jane’s voice when she borrow anything (as in 29-33).

Pattern of conversation:

1.      Calling

2.      Reply (Response)

3.      Request

4.      Response

5.      Say thanks

6.      Response

7.      Calling

8.      Response (Question)

9.      Explain

10.  Request  (in a low voice)

11.  Response

12.  Say thanks

13.  Response

14.  Calling

15.  Explain

16.  Request

17.  Response

18.  Say thanks

19.  farewell

20.  Say good bye

21.  Response

22.    Shock

23.    Response

24.    Statement

25.    Request

26.    Response

27.    Say thanks

28.    Greeting

29.    Imitate

30.    Imitate

31.    Imitate

32.    Quip

33.    Say thanks